Evaluation Assessment 1

Here is draft 1 of the evaluation section of my blog. As you can see I received a mark of 18 out of 20, which equaled an A grade. This shows that I am on target for my target grade, which is an A.

However, there are still some improvements that can be made which you can see below. These changes will hopefully make my mark better and thus help to solidify the A grade that I want.